I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 22 April 2020
my writing
Sorry miss will cleaning my hands with soap my brother stole my homework and glued it to a potato that was about to make a giant explosion and then it blew my homework into pieces sorry miss but that's what really happened.
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Oh Nikora, this is clever. You did well to write it in 42 words. Awesome. Would that be something your brother would do?
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