Tuesday, 30 October 2018

I am a Kiwi

I am a Kiwi
I am a kiwi
I wonder what the sun looks like when I am not in burrow.
I hear little grubs wriggling in a rotten tree.
I see the moon shining brightly in the night sky.
I want a nice juicy fruit for breakfast.
I am a kiwi.

I pretend to fly high in the sky when I'm sleeping.
I feel the cold breeze rustle my feathers.
I touch rotten logs to get my food.
I worry when my egg hatches it will be in danger.
I cry when there's only a little population of Kiwis left.
I am a sad kiwi.

I understand that we're going extinct.
I say get rid of wild cats so Kiwi stay live.
I dream to be flying up in the sky with all the other birds.
I tried to think happy thoughts when I see you.
I hope Kiwis don't go extinct like the moa.
I am an alive Kiwi.


5 comments:

  1. hi i`m Luka i agree that we should save kiwi their our national bird we don`t want an extinct bird as our national bird right?

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  2. Hi Nikora,
    Lara from Kaingaroa here i really enjoy your self description of a kiwi i think it is very unique, my advice would be to add a reflection or a WALT.
    Why did you pick to describe yourself as a Kiwi ?

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  3. hi your kiwi facts a great you have good punchuation

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  4. Hi my name is Marko i like your kiwi facts you have good punchuation.

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  5. Hi Nikora My name Louie I like your decribeing

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