Wednesday, 23 May 2018

All about me

Kia ora my name is Nikora.I am 9 years old and go to Waitohu school in Otaki.My best friend Campbell.

8 comments:

  1. Kia ora Nikora,

    Welcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.

    Vicki

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  2. Hi,i love how you have add your all about me it is awesome . Maybe next time you add something on your blog maybe you could make it a bit longer I live in otaki too it's a awesome place also i go to waitohu school and campbell is one of my friends too .
    What is your favourite subject ? I would love to know.

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  3. Hello Nikora
    You should add some colour to your writing and some colour to your background and maybe make it one sentence longer
    But otherwise I think it's pretty cool That you explain to your best friend was.

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  4. kai ora Nikora do you have any siblings ad a little more explaining but otherwise good.

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    1. yes I have two brother's.:)

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  6. hi Nikora my name is kaylee and i recon you can add more colour and make it a bit logger so we know more about you.

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  7. hey Nikora i'm Billy ray from kaingaroa school i thinking you should put more colour

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