I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 23 May 2018
All about me
Kia ora my name is Nikora.I am 9 years old and go to Waitohu school in Otaki.My best friend Campbell.
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Kia ora Nikora,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.
Vicki
Hi,i love how you have add your all about me it is awesome . Maybe next time you add something on your blog maybe you could make it a bit longer I live in otaki too it's a awesome place also i go to waitohu school and campbell is one of my friends too .
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favourite subject ? I would love to know.
Hello Nikora
ReplyDeleteYou should add some colour to your writing and some colour to your background and maybe make it one sentence longer
But otherwise I think it's pretty cool That you explain to your best friend was.
kai ora Nikora do you have any siblings ad a little more explaining but otherwise good.
ReplyDeleteyes I have two brother's.:)
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ReplyDeletehi Nikora my name is kaylee and i recon you can add more colour and make it a bit logger so we know more about you.
ReplyDeletehey Nikora i'm Billy ray from kaingaroa school i thinking you should put more colour
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