The mystery of the missing person
Have you ever solved a mystery because this is my first.So we have six photos now we need to put them together to find this person.So this bridge is on the other side of the town so we should start moving into the car.Ok we are here it is a 10 minute walk and we don’t want to camp out here.Ok now when I look at this photos I think that the note under the key mite have information on her Location so we need to find that note.I see a house up a head but it is a cross the lake.What is that it is a key.That key must open the house.Is that a boat coming towards us that is a clue that someone is on that island.Now we are here now let's see if the key opens the house let’s see if it does.Ok we are in.Wow what was that I think it was a dog.Over there a same sort of dog.It is a husky But who's.
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Friday, 22 June 2018
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The mystery of the missing person. What a great starting of title I loved reading this story
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