I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 24 April 2020
chen hates fruit
Chen’s favourite food wasn’t fruit but how could he tell his mum Chen’s freaking out he can’t just tell her he doesn't like bananas or cheese.They are so gross his eyeball starts to water up he would rather eat a bleached carrot then eat a banana or were no shoes for weeks then eat cheese that’s how much he HATES fruit but when he gathered the guts to tell his mum he went for it “Mum I don’t like fruit” his mum was shocked she couldn't believe it but she Agreed that he can just eat some fruit.The end.
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