I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Monday, 29 June 2020
Friday, 26 June 2020
full the bucket
LI:
To retell and describe an event or an experience.
Sentence starters.
Punctuation.
My story
Full the bucket game
Last week we went to the cort to play a game called full the bucket “GO” , the teacher said. Me and my classmates all raced to the bucket filled with warm yellow water. I grabbed a cup full of the warm water, put the edge in my mouth and ran to my bucket and then tipped it in then ran for more.I hated it but I wanted to win.When the bucket had little water left someone grabbed the bucket and poured it into there bucket and the game was over and no one won. This was all for writing.
Friday, 19 June 2020
under the tree
LI:
To describe a setting in a story.
The -ing sentence.
Double the last consonant.
The grass is greener than green. The bark on the tree is as rough as sandpaper. The birds singing their lovely song and the crunching of leaves under my feet. The sound of cars moving along the highway. The leaves in the tree swaying in the wind like a ninja in the night. The leaves in the brightest colors. Screaming kids coming from the gym. The wind blowing leaves like tumbleweeds. As I sit here under the tree I realise how amazing my life is.
Under the tree by Nikora.
Friday, 12 June 2020
Jonathan the dragon
Jonathan is a dragon from the fire tribe and he loves to explore but he was allowed to leave the village.Jonathan and a full metal jacket and his tail was made of lava with spikes. A truly dangerous weapon. He loves to use it in a fight. His eyes were full of rage. This came from years of abuse and trauma from the surrounding villages. Fire that bellowed from his mouth was hotter than the sun. And what made him the most deadly dragon around was the fact that he was faster than a comet.
1 week before he turned 16 his parents told him he had to complete a quest on his birthday. He was so excited. He was required to retrieve the orb from the mountain of DOOM. Stay ton for part 2.
1 week before he turned 16 his parents told him he had to complete a quest on his birthday. He was so excited. He was required to retrieve the orb from the mountain of DOOM. Stay ton for part 2.
Thursday, 11 June 2020
Friday, 5 June 2020
Subway
To Subway from a kid. About your food.
Subway everyone likes it but have they ever got your order wrong? They’ve often got my order wrong completely before.When they got my order wrong I had to take all the toppings I didn't like and there was a lot to take out.While Subway does have good food,the way that it is served is bad. The veggies fall out of the bun, sometimes the veggies are warm and the bread goes cold fast. It is not nice. Even the drink is warm right out of the machine and the ice won’t come out.
The bathrooms are so gross.The floors have toilet paper on them,pee on the floor and the floor is always wet with not just water.The people are nice but the floors are so gross.
Although I love Subway sometimes their a little slope.
Subway everyone likes it but have they ever got your order wrong? They’ve often got my order wrong completely before.When they got my order wrong I had to take all the toppings I didn't like and there was a lot to take out.While Subway does have good food,the way that it is served is bad. The veggies fall out of the bun, sometimes the veggies are warm and the bread goes cold fast. It is not nice. Even the drink is warm right out of the machine and the ice won’t come out.
The bathrooms are so gross.The floors have toilet paper on them,pee on the floor and the floor is always wet with not just water.The people are nice but the floors are so gross.
Although I love Subway sometimes their a little slope.
Tuesday, 2 June 2020
Dear Jacinda Ardern
Tuesday 2 June
Dear Jacinda Ardern AKA the best prime minister.My name is Nikora I live in a small town named Otaki and I love playing games with friends and I am 11 and close to 12.
Firstly I wanted to recognise how tough and stern you were.I am so grateful for your hard work to stop covid 19 and keeping New Zealand safe.Thank you for telling everyone it is going to be ok,we will get through this together you're the best.
You’re the best because you are confident.You are open to all questions and you are so positive to everyone.
If it wasn’t for you we will still have over 1000 cases of covid and growing.Thank you for thinking of others like having some being there to do sign language for people that are deaf.I love that you opened the food shops at alert level 3 thank you for the food.Thank you for being responsible and being a step ahead so thank you so much.
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