I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 28 February 2020
swimming sports
Everyone is getting warmed up and waiting for the gun to go off bang 3.2.1 GO!!!!.I’m nervous but when I smell the fresh air before hitting the cold refreshing water I relax.In seconds were at the end not knowing what place I came when I looked behind me I saw the water rippling after the race and the smoke from the gun.As I hop out of the pool over to my house colour we are all waiting for the next race to start.The end
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