I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Thursday, 30 July 2020
Story of King
LI:
To add detail about a character.
Using elements of science fiction to create a character
My story: The story of king Part one
It was a calm day on King's home planet Pluto as King was coming back from a long day of gathering all sort of staff. He was horrified with what he saw. The whole planet was getting sucked into a black hole all he could do was think to himself that he could do nothing to save his home but he could save his people. So he got as much people on his ship and flu off far away as he could sadly. He did not get everyone. They all decided to go to earth. 2 Years later they arrived it was….. Dark very dark. So they had to turn on the lights. When they are on the ship hits a mountain and falls down. Boom they hit the ground.
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